--- The scene comes alight as we see The Hunter going over a few things in his locker room ---

Hunter: Arghh! What is with this stupid piece of crap! Blasted phone companies selling me dodgy stuff. Man oh Man, I wish I was back home in Australia where we got decent items for our money.

--- As The Hunter is ranting and complaining, Raze appears at the door ---




This is for you to continue on with Raze.. This is the part where we lead into being tag teams and challenging amped and the MASS somebody :p

Raze walks into Hunter's locker room, Hunter sees Raze and starts taking a fighting stance


RAZE: whoa! whoa! whoa! easy there, cowboy, i'm not here to fight

HUNTER: what do you want Raze? get out of my locker room!

RAZE: relax cowboy, like i said 'm not here to...

HUNTER: and stop calling me cowboy

RAZE: alright, fair enough, look... Hunter... i came here under a banner of peace...

HUNTER: you have 2 minutes to say what you have to say Raze, then you better walk out of here else i rearrange your face...

RAZE: (smirks) see... this is what i like about you, Hunter, you've got a lot of spunk... look, i've seen first hand what you can do, and i... i respect that... fighting against you, it's like fighting against me, you've got heart and you're not afraid of anything. you remind me of me cowbo... i mean... Hunter. i have a proposition to make.

HUNTER: i'm listening...

RAZE: excellent. see here, Hunter, you and I know that we're good, really really good, and we know that when we walk out there, we send chills through the fans spines, we thrill them and we excite them.

HUNTER: (smiles) heh, well, that IS true.

RAZE: see? i know you see it too. but we have to realize something. this place... this place is a Slaughterhouse, we're good, but alone? we're going to get eaten alive out here. so what i'm proposing is that we "forge" a partnership, i'm not saying that we should be tag partners or whatnot, i'm just saying, we could be two great allies, looking out for each other and watching each other's back. that way we both could survive long enough to give the fans the thrill of their lifetimes.

HUNTER: (stares stares intently at Raze, mulling over his proposition)

RAZE: (extends his hand) so what do you say, Hunter? or should i say... partner?



this is how i see the first part of this storyline... i call this Chapter I - The Partnership

i'm seeing 5 Chapters for this storyline, in the same show, here's how it should go:

Chapter II - The Ambush
Chapter III - Intentions
Chapter IV - Asking for Revenge
Chapter V - The Matches

for the chapter on Ambush, the announcers are saying that you and me are heading to the center ring to make an announcement.. as we are seen on the Titantron walking towards the ring, MASS and amped jump out of nowhere and start pummeling us, hitting us with steel chairs and slamming us through walls and stuff. the announcers are baffled at what happened.

for chapter 3, MASS and amped walk to the ring and declare their intentions as to why they ambushed us, saying they are tired of the new guys around here taking the limelight away from them, and that it's their time to shine, they say that we are nothing compared to them and that given the chance they will wipe the floor with us, and prove once and for all that they are better

for Chapter 4, we storm into Blackdoom's office and demand that we face amped and MASS separately, we demand blood and that we want it now, Blackdoom agrees and books a match for the show, MASS vs raze, amped vs Hunter

for Chapter 5, we have the matches, you and amped go first, then me and MASS, if it's possible, after my match with MASS, whether i win or lose, amped comes running into the ring and starts pummeling me, MASS joins him and they double team me, you then come running to my aid, steel chair (or whatever weapon you prefer) in hand then start hitting MASS and amped. MASS and amped retreats while you help me off the ring along with security and medical personnel.

this could be a good setup for another match next show.

what do you think? if this is fine, i could start writing the ENTIRE storyline (announcer's dialogue, MASS and amped's lines) and you can edit it if you like.

Finishing of Chapter I



(extends his hand out to Raze's)

The Hunter: Partner!

( The two smile and Raze walks out the locker room)




This will be Chapter II - The Ambush



Announcer 1: I've just got word from the back that The Hunter and Raze are going to be coming out and making an annoucement..

Announcer 2: That's odd. This is the same Raze and Hunter that have been trying to tear each other apart the last few weeks?

.:Hunter and Raze appear standing at the top of the stage with microphones in their hands:.

The Hunter: Well folks, it has come to our attention that this is quite the brutal fed. I've seen broken noses, bleeding faces and even some men crying with pain. That is just sad but it proves to all just how brutal this place is! It also shows to me that I will thrive in here and take myself to brand new heights! Along side me here is Raze, he is one tough SOB but believe me when I say, he has a nice side to him as well. Now, we've decided that forming a 'partnership' so to speak will be the most appropriate means of action here. I can't take that offer for granted so I must accept! Simple as that really.

.:Just as Raze pulls the mic to his mouth, 'THE MASS' and 'amped' jump the newly formed partnership from behind and begin to pummel them with blows to the gut, head and chest:.

Announcer 1: Merciful Mother of Mary.. What in blue blayzes is going on here!! MASS and amped have just jumped the partnership for now apparent reason! I'm quite confused here, such an unexpected move

Announcer 2: I must agree there, however it seems that those two are also a partnership so to speak...

Announcer 1: Hmmm, this really has me baffled. They came out to announce their dominance so to speak and end up getting ambushed.. Weird!

Announcer 2: Well I have no idea then. Time to move along now anyway, can't always dwell on the past



Chapter III - The Intentions



.:THE MASS and amped begin walking to the middle of the ring holding AWF signature mics in their hand:.

Announcer 1: Ohh, here we go again.. They seem to want to beat up on some more new guys maybe?!

THE MASS: Now, your probably all wondering.. Why the hell did we attack those two? It's simple really. When someone new rocks up to your show and begins getting more attention that yourself, what do you have to do?! You obviously have to go out there and be more appealing! What better way to do that, than beating those people up! It worked didn't it!! You guys actually know who I am now..

Crowd: WHATT!!!

amped: Thats why tonight we decided to prove that we can hack it here in AWF. Alone and together if you wish! Tonight will be the night that you all remember wxactly who we are!

THE MASS: Enough speaking amped, I got it from here... So ahh Hunter and Razzle or Razberry or whatever the hell your name is.. You better be watching your backs!



Chapter IV - The Revenge



.:Raze and Hunter can be seen storming in the General Managers office. Blackdoom is seen sitting at his desk working through a mountain of papers. Hunter and Raze barge in unnannounced which is sure to not go down to well:.

Hunter: Did you just see what happened out there!!! amped and MASS just attacked us for no reason!! We demand that we are allowed revenge on them!

Blackdoom: First off, leave my office now. Close the door and then KNOCK! before you enter

.:Raze and The Hunter exit the office and close the door behind them. Raze knocks softly and then pushes the door open:.

Raze: Anyway, as Hunter was saying. Did you even see what happened out there?!?!? They just attacked us and for what.. because we were new and looked like a threat! Exactly! They are worried that Hunter and I will be propelled to new levels in which we will become to good for them! I've already seen improvements from just fighting Hunter all the time but together we gel and at this point in time, we want to use that to our advantage!

Hunter: So Blackdoom, what do you reckon? Are we worthy to get our hands on those two? Maybe THE MASS vs Raze and amped vs The Hunter.. That could be a nice headline!! Eyy, Eyy. You know that you want to.

Blackdoom: Alright you two can have your desired matches. MASS will take on Raze while Hunter will be taking on amped

.: The scene begins to fade to black as Blackdoom begins to usher the two out of his office:.



Chapter V - The Matches



---The Hunter vs amped--- (OOC - Doesn't matter who wins)

---Raze vs THE MASS--- (OOC - Prefereably amped comes down to the ring, causing a DQ then they begins pummeling Raze.. I come running out to the ring holding a kendo stick. Those two run out of the ring before I can land a single blow)



That is how we would like our storyline to end for the night
Hope you all enjoy it